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Losing Anchor (Free verse) by dragonfly I'm losing anchor.
Don't let go of me,
or I'll be pulled into the bay.
Keep holding my hand,
or I'll be washed away.
The ocean tide inches closer
to where I stand,
Slowly upheaving my feet
from the sand.
And I'm losing anchor.
Don't let go of me,
or I'll be swept away.
Don't take your eyes off me,
or I'll drown in the bay
Up the ladder:
drought on talkin river
Down the ladder:
Take Four
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Posted: August 16, 2003 10:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2003 10:18 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.8333335 Overall Rank: 336 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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16-Aug-03/10:30 PM
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I'm losing patience.
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dragonfly @ 165.247.213.132
> <{Baba^Yaga}>
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16-Aug-03/10:33 PM
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lol. I hate water. I can't swim. = /
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
> dragonfly
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16-Aug-03/10:46 PM
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I strongly urge you to learn. Because, you never know where space rock will land or when.
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