Losing Anchor

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

I'm losing anchor. Don't let go of me, or I'll be pulled into the bay. Keep holding my hand, or I'll be washed away. The ocean tide inches closer to where I stand, Slowly upheaving my feet from the sand. And I'm losing anchor. Don't let go of me, or I'll be swept away. Don't take your eyes off me, or I'll drown in the bay

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 16-Aug-03/10:30 PM Reply

I'm losing patience.

[n/a] dragonfly › <{Baba^Yaga}> 16-Aug-03/10:33 PM Reply

lol. I hate water. I can't swim. = /

[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> › dragonfly 16-Aug-03/10:46 PM Reply

I strongly urge you to learn. Because, you never know where space rock will land or when.