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Loss (Free verse) by justjay
Anguish, feeling lust in a world unknown.
Pain, it burns inside.
Desire for someone.
Voices are heard but
no one is seen.
Feeling pain come at a single moment,
knocking you off balance.
Meaningful words turn to nothing;
Actions are unconfirmed.
Going to the point when you,
just don't care about anything.
Knowing that nothing cares about you.
You crawl to a place to hide,
but even there is unsafe.
And you know there is only one answer,
unfortunately it can be misleading.
Back to nothing.
Alone in a whirl of self-pity.
Feeling trapped. . . .
Looking for away to break loose.
Lost in a single entity,
which bears to nothing and no one.
Loss
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12151
Posted: August 10, 2003 1:02 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2003 1:02 PM PDT
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