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Loss (Free verse) by justjay
Anguish, feeling lust in a world unknown. Pain, it burns inside. Desire for someone. Voices are heard but no one is seen. Feeling pain come at a single moment, knocking you off balance. Meaningful words turn to nothing; Actions are unconfirmed. Going to the point when you, just don't care about anything. Knowing that nothing cares about you. You crawl to a place to hide, but even there is unsafe. And you know there is only one answer, unfortunately it can be misleading. Back to nothing. Alone in a whirl of self-pity. Feeling trapped. . . . Looking for away to break loose. Lost in a single entity, which bears to nothing and no one. Loss

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