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A Reason to Live (Sonnet) by indiechic656
Her easy smile is much akin to light, as anything that cheers one up should be; a friend to hardship always adds delight, chasing away all things that bother me. But it was her, not me, who needed hope; A friend erases all the hurt and pain; supports bound tight, though neither one could cope; In losing freedom, rules and fear she'd gained. A hidden shadow lurking cornerwise, not visible, but still there all the same. A masked avenger that I so despise, A rampant thing even the best can't tame. Effectively, with mind and soul it toyed; A thing removed is not a thing destroyed.

Up the ladder: American Eden
Down the ladder: Power Structures

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8339
Posted: August 5, 2003 8:48 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2003 8:48 PM PDT
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