poemranker ::A Reason to Live by indiechic656

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Sonnet № 59510

A Reason to Live

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Aug 2003 · 0 comments

Her easy smile is much akin to light, as anything that cheers one up should be; a friend to hardship always adds delight, chasing away all things that bother me. But it was her, not me, who needed hope; A friend erases all the hurt and pain; supports bound tight, though neither one could cope; In losing freedom, rules and fear she'd gained. A hidden shadow lurking cornerwise, not visible, but still there all the same. A masked avenger that I so despise, A rampant thing even the best can't tame. Effectively, with mind and soul it toyed; A thing removed is not a thing destroyed.

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