Magnets & Cross-Eyed Children

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Jul 2003 · Edited 10 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

I came to you in need You followed me with lies A gravity compressing with no compromise A silence as heavy as all of the steel You could put in a gun, Or chasis on wheels. I have for you something, but it is a secret. I have for you something, you will never deserve. A perfect attraction, and I'll let you keep it. A glass crackling symphony Of garulous verve. When I'm done, you can kiss my ass As you make those Indians move I'll be your future shadow's past & bring the devil's sassiest groove. And in fact if my memory serves me right Which it always does You were not much to remember Now that magnets buzz.

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[8] <~> 31-Jul-03/1:07 PM Reply

sweet father of nearsighted little-leaguers!

[1] Thom 1-Aug-03/8:37 PM Reply

Cross eyed children and magnets....must have gotten shot with a BB gun. Be careful if you go for an MRI!

[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 10-Oct-03/5:30 PM Reply

This poem is nowhere near as excellent as the title would suggest.

[n/a] Shuushin 11-Oct-03/5:18 AM Reply

Puts the physics back in metaphysical -

I really like the sounds made by
"you will never deserve" ... / "of farulous verve"