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Long Journey (Free verse) by libby_28
Youâve pushed me into this slumber of sadness:
Down this bitter road to loneliness,
Only for one day to be blindsided.
Body thrown about as a rag doll,
Shards of glass entering my skin,
Pain, but only for a short time.
Blood on the pavement, my mind elsewhere,
This is something I wasn't ready for.
It will take years to let go.
Wounds will heal in time,
Only to reveal scars to last forever.
These are my bitter memories of you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8417
Posted: July 29, 2003 7:03 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 7:03 AM PDT
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'Blood on the pavement my mind elsewhere' I like though distant and irreverent