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Forgotten (Other) by Queen of Tease
My thoughts linger as the sun sets Of all the yesterdays done past I sigh as I look ahead Dreaming it could last Yet, I know it will not For today has come and gone So, I am left here all alone Friends? I have none Just me, myself, and I Sitting here in this lonely place Not a sound can be heard As I feel the sun's last bit of warmth upon my face Now the day is done And all she can do is grieve Because a cold shoulder is all she recieved.

Up the ladder: I wanna convert him
Down the ladder: Unrealistic

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6211
Posted: July 25, 2003 4:28 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2003 4:28 PM PDT
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[6] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.29 | 26-Jul-03/7:26 PM | Reply
This IS a lonely place.
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