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Forgotten

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · 1 comment

My thoughts linger as the sun sets Of all the yesterdays done past I sigh as I look ahead Dreaming it could last Yet, I know it will not For today has come and gone So, I am left here all alone Friends? I have none Just me, myself, and I Sitting here in this lonely place Not a sound can be heard As I feel the sun's last bit of warmth upon my face Now the day is done And all she can do is grieve Because a cold shoulder is all she recieved.

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[6] http://mulberryfairy 26-Jul-03/7:26 PM Reply
This IS a lonely place.