poemranker ::All night by LuckyJoe

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Free verse № 57313

All night

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

Allow me one chance, To put shine on your face, Glow upon your body, Overheat your senses, Show you how to indulge, Thoughts of what I can do, Listen; you’ll have no regret, Lips to trace your body, Watch out its about to get naughty, Over come by pleasure, Things are bound to get spotty. Take a breath… The moans echo… Ever growing louder, A smirk on my face, Yeah, I couldn’t be prouder. Deep within… Thoughts of impurity; sin? Bliss… shown in a kiss. Sweat drips from my body, To yours already covered, Slip and slide… Doing a little loving glide, My thumb rubbing your… Rhythmic clinches around my… Holding back till the time is right, What a pleasureful fight. Can’t let go… Busy putting on a show. This is happening all night.

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[10] Druid_Girl_1984 24-Jul-03/10:11 PM Reply
Oh you are a naughty person. hehe. i need a fan. lmao. i love it though. = )
[8] deleted user 27-Jul-03/11:01 AM Reply
lol funny