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All night (Free verse) by LuckyJoe
Allow me one chance, To put shine on your face, Glow upon your body, Overheat your senses, Show you how to indulge, Thoughts of what I can do, Listen; you’ll have no regret, Lips to trace your body, Watch out its about to get naughty, Over come by pleasure, Things are bound to get spotty. Take a breath… The moans echo… Ever growing louder, A smirk on my face, Yeah, I couldn’t be prouder. Deep within… Thoughts of impurity; sin? Bliss… shown in a kiss. Sweat drips from my body, To yours already covered, Slip and slide… Doing a little loving glide, My thumb rubbing your… Rhythmic clinches around my… Holding back till the time is right, What a pleasureful fight. Can’t let go… Busy putting on a show. This is happening all night.

Up the ladder: selfish

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.428571
Weighted score: 5.6531434
Overall Rank: 2093
Posted: July 24, 2003 6:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 6:55 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] Druid_Girl_1984 @ 209.214.109.169 | 24-Jul-03/10:11 PM | Reply
Oh you are a naughty person. hehe. i need a fan. lmao. i love it though. = )
[8] deleted user @ 64.12.96.237 | 27-Jul-03/11:01 AM | Reply
lol funny
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