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All night (Free verse) by LuckyJoe
Allow me one chance,
To put shine on your face,
Glow upon your body,
Overheat your senses,
Show you how to indulge,
Thoughts of what I can do,
Listen; youâll have no regret,
Lips to trace your body,
Watch out its about to get naughty,
Over come by pleasure,
Things are bound to get spotty.
Take a breathâ¦
The moans echoâ¦
Ever growing louder,
A smirk on my face,
Yeah, I couldnât be prouder.
Deep withinâ¦
Thoughts of impurity; sin?
Bliss⦠shown in a kiss.
Sweat drips from my body,
To yours already covered,
Slip and slideâ¦
Doing a little loving glide,
My thumb rubbing yourâ¦
Rhythmic clinches around myâ¦
Holding back till the time is right,
What a pleasureful fight.
Canât let goâ¦
Busy putting on a show.
This is happening all night.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.428571
Weighted score: 5.6531434
Overall Rank: 2093
Posted: July 24, 2003 6:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 6:55 AM PDT
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