Bring me back to life

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

Bring me back to life I repent my death Be a soul to my soul Be heartbeat for my heart Be poetry to my tongue Be a flame in my cold blood Be a wave in my veins Bring me back to life I regret my death There is a lot left in my life's plan There is a lot of desire in my heart I repent my death Bring me back to life Be fiery lips A new alphabet for my language Give me back the strength to cry To tremble, to get shocked Bring me back to life I regret my death Sow with stars The dark twinkling of my night Renew my address Bring me back to life I repent my death

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[7] RobinGayle 20-Jul-02/8:49 AM Reply

Ahhh, if only this were possible. Great visual with sowing the stars.

[7] Bachus 1-Aug-02/4:56 PM Reply

I read this one upside down and still enjoyed. Thank God for Pabst.

[7] ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/5:02 PM Reply

pas mal pas mal

[3] god'swife 3-Sep-02/8:30 AM Reply

"renew my address" is a good line. The rest is too cliche.