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Bring me back to life (Free verse) by kawakurdi
Bring me back to life I repent my death Be a soul to my soul Be heartbeat for my heart Be poetry to my tongue Be a flame in my cold blood Be a wave in my veins Bring me back to life I regret my death There is a lot left in my life's plan There is a lot of desire in my heart I repent my death Bring me back to life Be fiery lips A new alphabet for my language Give me back the strength to cry To tremble, to get shocked Bring me back to life I regret my death Sow with stars The dark twinkling of my night Renew my address Bring me back to life I repent my death

Up the ladder: To my heart
Down the ladder: School

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3747
Posted: July 20, 2002 7:45 AM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2002 7:45 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] RobinGayle @ 205.188.209.168 | 20-Jul-02/8:49 AM | Reply
Ahhh, if only this were possible. Great visual with sowing the stars.
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Aug-02/4:56 PM | Reply
I read this one upside down and still enjoyed. Thank God for Pabst.
[7] ==Doylum @ 213.122.117.52 | 1-Aug-02/5:02 PM | Reply
pas mal pas mal
[3] god'swife @ 209.179.211.114 | 3-Sep-02/8:30 AM | Reply
"renew my address" is a good line. The rest is too cliche.
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