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Bring me back to life (Free verse) by kawakurdi

Bring me back to life I repent my death Be a soul to my soul Be heartbeat for my heart Be poetry to my tongue Be a flame in my cold blood Be a wave in my veins Bring me back to life I regret my death There is a lot left in my life's plan There is a lot of desire in my heart I repent my death Bring me back to life Be fiery lips A new alphabet for my language Give me back the strength to cry To tremble, to get shocked Bring me back to life I regret my death Sow with stars The dark twinkling of my night Renew my address Bring me back to life I repent my death

god'swife 3-Sep-02/8:30 AM
"renew my address" is a good line. The rest is too cliche.




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