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Twennotmety (Other) by Brian Tiensvold
I'm never ready for tomorrow espesialy today. I havn't changed in anyway. Still always wanting to be something new but i remain the same. In love. In dreams. In pain. In black. In no means. Insain. And not a word is heard in my screams. My violence is silenced and seems to be scaling to the top of the cliff that she dropped off wile holding my heart. Twenty, and never been this ready for all things to fall apart.

Down the ladder: Sunday

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10852
Posted: June 25, 2003 10:54 PM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2003 10:54 PM PDT
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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 25-Jun-03/11:01 PM | Reply
I believe it's spelled "while" young man. Carry on.
[8] DurtKL @ 68.75.20.138 | 25-Jun-03/11:29 PM | Reply
especially

insane

i feel like everything falls apart
then i look to christ
and i hate him for it
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