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Leaving me Lost (Free verse) by JoeDiamond252 Youve pressed a steel barrel to my temple
cocked the gun with your fist
walked past when ive reached
held my head under water
taken a knife to my throat
cut loose my wings and let me fly
tightened my noose around my neck
two fists tighten under my chin
all with a smile,
all with a laugh
You kill my soul,
kill it with a grin
Up the ladder:
Content with Sadness
Down the ladder:
Me, Myself and I
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Posted: June 17, 2003 1:39 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 1:39 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.483454 Overall Rank: 12847 Comments:
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god'swife @ 198.81.26.113
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17-Jun-03/6:43 PM
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keep the first line. burn the rest.
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