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Leaving me Lost (Free verse) by JoeDiamond252

Youve pressed a steel barrel to my temple cocked the gun with your fist walked past when ive reached held my head under water taken a knife to my throat cut loose my wings and let me fly tightened my noose around my neck two fists tighten under my chin all with a smile, all with a laugh You kill my soul, kill it with a grin

god'swife 17-Jun-03/6:43 PM
keep the first line. burn the rest.




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