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My Loss (Lyric) by Miggy
Sometimes I just can’t ever try to live without All the suffering, all the pain Sometimes my body goes but the mind won’t allow Trying to avoid all the shame (Bridge) My fears, my faults, my tears, my thoughts My tries, my trust, my lies, my loss My loss of reality… (Chorus) No wants, no needs Just a mind to set and a rage to feed No wants, no needs Just a soul to find and a heart to bleed Sometimes I try to change the wanted protocol Under my own command Sometimes it’s better to find a way to take a fall Running from all demands (Chorus) So fallow, hallow, shallow Losing the trust in me So depressed, obsessed, unrest Losing the trust in me (Chorus/Ending)

Up the ladder: Memory
Down the ladder: 86'd

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 6.8798647
Overall Rank: 259
Posted: June 17, 2003 12:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 12:19 PM PDT
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