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days past (Free verse) by ElephantSandwich
I sit awake Light glaring Eyes glazing Me staring To my past and the way it was The memories that I will never forget The times that I wish were eternity To the day that our eyes met I convinced myself You were an angel Taking care of my heart Was lost in yours The heavens broke our bond I knew it was for the best I wanted to stay friends You were unlike the rest But what can I say now My heart convinced me Of things I wanted to hear Of things untrue

Up the ladder: ~Dreams
Down the ladder: Malcontent

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6689
Posted: June 8, 2003 2:43 AM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2003 2:43 AM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Jun-03/1:19 PM | Reply
Yes, it did.
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