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The joke is wearing thin (Free verse) by QUENDO
_________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________I am not wearing anything_________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________Your road to ruin shall now begin_______________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________You cry and grimace; I laugh and grin_____________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________And wipe the blood from off my chin_______________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________I once knew not where to begin_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________Now my destiny is sin_____________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________But look - the joke is wearing thin_____________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________

Up the ladder: FeaR
Down the ladder: Lonely Love.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11081
Posted: May 29, 2003 2:43 AM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2003 2:45 AM PDT
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[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-May-03/9:36 AM | Reply
you are a mere sutler in an overview of the war plan, sorry 10!
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