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Next To Me (Free verse) by casey
I have to thank my friends, For all the odds and ends, And making me see, Even when I disagree, Things that are all too true, What I hid from view, Even though many have hinted, I still see the world through glasses tinted, None I believe, I think they decieve, Until my friends show it to me, It's than that I see. What they said, Makes me stop dead, It registers in my mind, And has gotten me out of a bind, I realized that what they say is true, And what I have to live up too, No matter where I ran, Or if I hid in a garbage can, Or who I cried too, What they say would still be true, My desicions I make, Some are a piece of cake, But if I ever needed their support, Or if I was falling short, Here they would be, Right next to me, Things have happened before, And again once more: In them I could trust, This is why I love them so much.

Up the ladder: A thought
Down the ladder: Dont break my heart

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12635
Posted: May 25, 2003 8:57 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2003 9:05 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23 | 26-May-03/4:56 PM | Reply
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