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Free verse № 49712

Over Wait

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 May 2003 · 1 comment

I hate being reminded to listen but it seems all to easy to drift your replacement has a melodic voice I just wish she had something to say it's hard to listen as I repeat it's over at least I don't have to wait for a reply.

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[3] Robert K Foster 21-May-03/10:34 AM Reply
"too easy to drift". true. it's too hard to pay attention when something doesn't say anything at all, rambling ambiguity rambilng redundantly in nothingness but repetition. Yeehaa maw. chicken feet.