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Over Wait (Free verse) by flatliner I hate being reminded to listen
but it seems all to easy to drift
your replacement has a melodic voice
I just wish she had something to say
it's hard to listen as I repeat it's over
at least I don't have to wait for a reply.
Up the ladder:
Round Here
Down the ladder:
A Promise
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Posted: May 21, 2003 8:46 AM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 8:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.5965877 Overall Rank: 12545 Comments:
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Robert K Foster @ 209.68.67.213
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21-May-03/10:34 AM
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"too easy to drift". true. it's too hard to pay attention when something doesn't say anything at all, rambling ambiguity rambilng redundantly in nothingness but repetition. Yeehaa maw. chicken feet.
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