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Over Wait (Free verse) by flatliner

I hate being reminded to listen but it seems all to easy to drift your replacement has a melodic voice I just wish she had something to say it's hard to listen as I repeat it's over at least I don't have to wait for a reply.

Robert K Foster 21-May-03/10:34 AM
"too easy to drift". true. it's too hard to pay attention when something doesn't say anything at all, rambling ambiguity rambilng redundantly in nothingness but repetition. Yeehaa maw. chicken feet.




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