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Goldfish in his little bowl (Free verse) by daniella
Chirping fish spins serene. Awaiting the astral chariot's sustenance delivered from the hands above. Glowing in a deep sphere this Apollo's archer in the domed void.
Up the ladder: prettycock
Down the ladder: A Fine Day To Exit
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3301
Posted: May 17, 2003 9:03 PM PDT; Last modified: May 17, 2003 9:03 PM PDT
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[9] richa @ 195.92.194.17 | 18-May-03/7:25 AM | Reply
you are one of the writers who is not as well known as top ones such as mr pig and zzinnia but your poems stand out from most of the pack.

As for this its use of language is beautiful and as a poem is complete
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.200.124 > richa | 19-May-03/5:35 PM | Reply
have always considered myself the underdawg... thanx for handing me a cup!
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 18-May-03/9:29 AM | Reply
Hey, whats with stealin' my goldfish mojo, man?
[n/a] daniella @ 200.68.200.124 > INTRANSIT | 19-May-03/5:38 PM | Reply
sorry dahling. did not mean to. take it back, i am spent....
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.14 > daniella | 19-May-03/6:57 PM | Reply
hey, even underdogs make it out.....
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