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Goldfish in his little bowl

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 May 2003 · 5 comments

Chirping fish spins serene. Awaiting the astral chariot's sustenance delivered from the hands above. Glowing in a deep sphere this Apollo's archer in the domed void.

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[9] richa 18-May-03/7:25 AM Reply

you are one of the writers who is not as well known as top ones such as mr pig and zzinnia but your poems stand out from most of the pack.

As for this its use of language is beautiful and as a poem is complete

[n/a] daniella › richa 19-May-03/5:35 PM Reply

have always considered myself the underdawg... thanx for handing me a cup!

[9] INTRANSIT 18-May-03/9:29 AM Reply

Hey, whats with stealin' my goldfish mojo, man?

[n/a] daniella › INTRANSIT 19-May-03/5:38 PM Reply

sorry dahling. did not mean to. take it back, i am spent....

[9] INTRANSIT › daniella 19-May-03/6:57 PM Reply

hey, even underdogs make it out.....