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Goldfish in his little bowl (Free verse) by daniella

Chirping fish spins serene. Awaiting the astral chariot's sustenance delivered from the hands above. Glowing in a deep sphere this Apollo's archer in the domed void.

richa 18-May-03/7:25 AM
you are one of the writers who is not as well known as top ones such as mr pig and zzinnia but your poems stand out from most of the pack.

As for this its use of language is beautiful and as a poem is complete




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