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While (Free verse) by argylesocks2017
It took a while the sun came up we came down the fireman's pole the policeman's ball the toilet stopped up the shops all closed the deck chairs empty plastic plates upturned not even ants at the picnic canvas rolled the years back accumulating. Not stopping.

Up the ladder: Remember
Down the ladder: Techno Whore

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5237
Posted: May 7, 2003 11:06 AM PDT; Last modified: May 7, 2003 11:06 AM PDT
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