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While (Free verse) by argylesocks2017
It took a while
the sun came up
we came down
the fireman's pole
the policeman's ball
the toilet stopped up
the shops all closed
the deck chairs empty
plastic plates upturned
not even ants at the picnic
canvas rolled
the years back
accumulating. Not stopping.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5237
Posted: May 7, 2003 11:06 AM PDT; Last modified: May 7, 2003 11:06 AM PDT
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