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Free verse № 48679

While

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 May 2003 · 0 comments

It took a while the sun came up we came down the fireman's pole the policeman's ball the toilet stopped up the shops all closed the deck chairs empty plastic plates upturned not even ants at the picnic canvas rolled the years back accumulating. Not stopping.

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