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The Guardian Shadow (Free verse) by loneshadow29
Tears of the fallen
Embraced by gentle slumber
heartbreak and sorrow rest in peace
The lonely shadow has now found his place
Amongst the many and the few
Forever and always shall he be
The guardian of the broken hearted
The savior of the sorrowed
Forever shall he bring peace
Amidst the chaos of life itself
Never meant is he
To find the true love he desires
Only does peace he shall know
Of the happiness he shall bring
To the ones he cares for
Shattered dreams will befall him
Hopefully he shall rebuild what once was
of the hopes of his fallen brethren
On a throne of sorrow shall he sit
But yet held in such high esteem
For their savior the shadow has become
The rebuilder of shattered dreams
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9428
Posted: May 4, 2003 9:19 PM PDT; Last modified: May 4, 2003 9:24 PM PDT
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Yeah, kind of like an out of order soda machine at an airport in Syracuse.
"On a throne of sorrow shall he sit" No, croutch.
"The rebuilder of shattered dreams" I think what you meant to say was scattered legumes.