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A brief history in destruction

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Apr 2003 · Edited 13 Mar 2004 · 2 comments

Here's your lesson Place it somewhere deep Don't socialize with darkness before it's all extinct. A brief history in destruction the world's a friendly place There are people all around you who recognize your face. Leave your money and your blood religion needs some structure Just jot it down on paper, a brief history in destruction. There's joy in breathing gas There's a blemish on your skin Now you're looking puzzled You have just lost your innocence. There's perplexity in your voice maturity in your choice there's answers in that rope tied tight around your throat.

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[8] SupremeDreamer 13-Mar-04/6:23 AM Reply
Brainwashing... genius.. pure genius.. soon enough we will be celebrating "Suicide Day".
[9] deleted user 14-Mar-04/6:32 PM Reply
I hate these morbid poems,
and love the way you've written this one.
It's the way of poets to write this stuff.
Wish we could all escape.