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Loss I havn't yet known (Haiku) by cleverdevice Nothing can hurt more
Than the death of someone close,
I should imagine.
Up the ladder:
untitled (readjuster)
Down the ladder:
A pinch from the snuff box
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.714286
Posted: April 22, 2003 2:37 PM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 2:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9231596 Overall Rank: 9401 Comments:
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deleted user @ 152.163.188.228
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22-Apr-03/6:29 PM
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hmm, kinda plan
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deleted user @ 152.163.189.171
> deleted user
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22-Apr-03/6:30 PM
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plain*
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cleverdevice @ 213.122.94.118
> deleted user
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23-Apr-03/2:04 PM
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I was just trying to counter the waves of false emotion I see here, friends and family all dying and what-have-you. Some of it could be real, but not all of it. Its fairly similar to how I'd imagine Phillip Larkin to write should he ever have deleved into Haiku form
Hey cd how's it going? Have you revised anything yet? I most definitely haven't. Ah well.
Nice poem, short (heh, it's a haiku), blunt and certainly true. It's already garnered a 7 so that shall be the standard by which I shall follow. Good Evening, sir!
revise, i don't know what you mean?
haven't
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