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under my skin (Free verse) by bitter grinding hard to make you pure
i dug a hole and poured you inside
keeping you under my skin
and wiped up the dust left over
so they couldn't take you away
Up the ladder:
moments lost in adversity
Down the ladder:
Before The Miscarriage.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: April 21, 2003 9:36 AM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2003 9:36 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6679 Comments:
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If I had a 'personal favorites' section implemented, this would be added to it just for the picture I'm seeing. On the off chance that I'd try to paint it someday. meanwhile, I'll just make a note to myself on skwerms.org. :) 7, still, for its slight awkwardness, and I don't see it going over an 8, for content. odd, that.