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Show who you are (Lyric) by geewhiz1962
Lost in this Illusion, It's causing such confusion. What others will say, does it matter, anyway. Time on Earth is so little, I hate it in the middle. Show who you are, I can't really tell much, I swear. Show who you are, I won't judge you, I am here. Sometimes when I see you, I can't really see through. Those things you're hiding, They influence my writing. Things in your past, I wonder why they still last. Show who you are, I can't really tell much, I swear Show who you are, I won't judge you, I am here. I watch you sometimes, Singing to their rhymes. So deep are your thoughts? Are you living their plots? Is it a diversion you seek? Let me in for a peek. Show who you are, I can't really tell much, I swear. Show who you are, I won't judge you, I am here. Mistakes of our past, can they be set free, at last. Are encounters so precious? Should parting be gracious? Put an end to those stories, Move onto new glories. Show who you are, I won't judge you, I swear.

Up the ladder: and i don't even care
Down the ladder: won't let out

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11879
Posted: April 8, 2003 9:57 AM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2003 9:57 AM PDT
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[8] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 8-Apr-03/8:01 PM | Reply
Oh... Look... I've cried in my pants again, i swear.
[n/a] geewhiz1962 @ 206.21.122.13 > Shardik | 9-Apr-03/9:36 AM | Reply
What the hell is does that mean?
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