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To Me (Free verse) by Birdman42s
You turned my darkness into light; You made everything all right. You picked me up when I was down; You turned my life around. If I didn't have you, what would I be? A blessing is what you are to me. When I needed you the most, you were there; Even if it seemed like you didn't care. When I didn't think I could make it another day, You chased all my doubts away. If I didn't have you, what would I be? A treasure is what you are to me. The world is full of many people, it's true; But there is only one of you. You fill my heart with love; You're a God-sent gift from above. If I didn't have you, what would I be? An angel is what you are to me. Lost and alone, I will no longer be; Because you are here with me. There is no reason to be sad; Because you've taken away all the bad. If I didn't have you, what would I be? A best friend is what you are to me!!

Up the ladder: Crucifixion
Down the ladder: selfish

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.428571
Weighted score: 5.6531434
Overall Rank: 2091
Posted: March 25, 2003 7:17 PM PST; Last modified: March 25, 2003 7:17 PM PST
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[10] angel_uy @ 24.224.212.192 | 17-Apr-03/4:49 AM | Reply
its a fantastic poem, i actually like all your work i've read so far.
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