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easy (Sonnet) by kthulah
what evidence of summer storms remain upon the stones devoid of life's dark stain what succulence can droplets add to fruits when orchards nonexistent haven't roots what grief then should the cloud against the earth whose jagged mountaintops provoke to birth precipitation frozen from the womb feel for the granite seed to never bloom and so my love my love is nebulous unblown away it hovers anhelous awaiting signs to justify its care yet while it lingers raining gently there without evaporation from its cause it dissipates as if it never was

Up the ladder: Parting the Curtains
Down the ladder: When will Tomorrow Come

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5557
Posted: March 20, 2003 11:03 PM PST; Last modified: March 20, 2003 11:03 PM PST
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[n/a] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 21-Mar-03/2:30 AM | Reply
Easy? If I'm reading it right this is about unaquainted love being delt with. That's easy?
[n/a] kthulah @ 80.230.59.57 > OneFingerAnswer | 21-Mar-03/3:01 AM | Reply
Once I know a love is unrequited, I am very easy to get rid of.
[6] intheailse @ 194.66.175.74 | 21-Mar-03/8:08 AM | Reply
like it....but undecided whether the title is suitable...
[n/a] kthulah @ 80.230.59.57 > intheailse | 22-Mar-03/4:03 AM | Reply
Hmmm...Well what would be a better name than "easy"?
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