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Blossoms (Free verse) by phbiscuit
Remembering well
The soft petals
Of new blossoms falling
With the sweet smell of sadness
Drops of grief
Puddle in my hands
Reminding nature to be
Merciful in its beauty
Wind twirls the fallen flowers
Sweeping up sensations
Now in my hands
Splashed against the ground
Grief, love, and hope
Settle the dust
Breezes stir once more
Blossoms and dust alike
Float away together
Their dance
Blossom and dust
Beauty and dismay
A bittersweet reminder
Of my watching pretty trees
And letting you float away
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.888889
Weighted score: 5.4444447
Overall Rank: 2975
Posted: July 12, 2002 10:27 PM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 10:27 PM PDT
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