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Voices

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

Feeling all the snow is falling Rest assured I here you calling Darkness takes away the day Hearing you so far away Hark I heard a quiet scream Watching snowflakes start to gleam Still I cannot see a light Seeing all but day of night Soon I must begin to walk Hearing voices nearer talk Stumbling alone along the snow I begin to think there's more to know Voices getting ever near They try to take my deepest fear But fear still will come to be My mind in shock to what I see

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[3] Bachus 31-Jul-02/6:39 PM Reply
See that bobber on the end of your pole kid. That's god trying to tell you something. And what he's saying by jerking your lucky bobber around like that is PULL, PULL YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS! Thus capturing the fish enabeling you to spread the good clean word. And don't forget to share your fish! That is all. Good day
[2] god'swife 27-Aug-02/4:55 PM Reply
Caught mommy and daddy going for it huh?