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Apex of the Moon (Ode) by scornofangels
Where rivers tie together and snow retracts from ice, a storm therein is brewing I never thought came twice. Reflections in the sky deliver me the rain derived from the emotions which lead the path astray. A journey through the valley, then to the mountain's crest. Again I stumble downward within my aching breast. Catch me as I fall. Heal these throbbing wounds. Deliver me again to the apex of the moon.

Up the ladder: this old man (edit)
Down the ladder: What Do You Want From Me?

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5737
Posted: March 10, 2003 9:52 AM PST; Last modified: March 10, 2003 9:52 AM PST
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