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i said, he said (Free verse) by eyzwdeshut
i said he said
i laughed, i cried you left, you went
i loved, i died you let me go
a thousand ways you walked away
a thousand lies you didn't know
i lovd you still i loved you then
but i needed more & i love you now
i turned my back but that is all
i closed the door my heart will allow
i bruised your soul i listened, i learned
i brok your heart you taught me well
but then my guilt & in the past
tore me apart i will not dwell
forgive my faults no more hurt
forgive my lies no more shame
a second chance never again
another try? to feel that pain
don't walk out i gave to you
don't walk away what i could give
give me an hour i'm moving on
give me a day it's time to live.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7660
Posted: March 2, 2003 8:48 PM PST; Last modified: March 2, 2003 8:48 PM PST
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