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i said, he said (Free verse) by eyzwdeshut

i said he said i laughed, i cried you left, you went i loved, i died you let me go a thousand ways you walked away a thousand lies you didn't know i lovd you still i loved you then but i needed more & i love you now i turned my back but that is all i closed the door my heart will allow i bruised your soul i listened, i learned i brok your heart you taught me well but then my guilt & in the past tore me apart i will not dwell forgive my faults no more hurt forgive my lies no more shame a second chance never again another try? to feel that pain don't walk out i gave to you don't walk away what i could give give me an hour i'm moving on give me a day it's time to live.

hipster flare 3-Mar-03/7:53 AM
nice form, trite topic, but nice form. perhaps more precise images or specific details...




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