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Could it be You (When the Sunshines Through...) (Free verse) by DreamMachine
Could it be you?, Are you the one for me?; My soul-survivor, I feel rekindled; Like you're passions harvest my fire, Only you can move the mountains within me, Rock-Crushing; You break through my desires, But what's to become of us?, As you enter my mind; Will you like what you see?, No-One but GOD can tell you what you'll find, Because within you; My emotions erupt like a volcano, Atop it you await me; I become devoted, To you; You to me, Together we mend; Glued, And flesh into one, We become a stitch in time; Sewed together by GOD's hands, Of a fabric that'll last forever, A movie that can't rewind, Play only; My love for you becomes that of no other kind, For you my love; Are my Ray of Sunshine

Up the ladder: THE FATHER
Down the ladder: Strength

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9420
Posted: February 25, 2003 2:37 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2003 2:37 PM PST
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