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Could it be You (When the Sunshines Through...) (Free verse) by DreamMachine
Could it be you?,
Are you the one for me?; My soul-survivor,
I feel rekindled; Like you're passions harvest my fire,
Only you can move the mountains within me,
Rock-Crushing; You break through my desires,
But what's to become of us?,
As you enter my mind; Will you like what you see?,
No-One but GOD can tell you what you'll find,
Because within you; My emotions erupt like a volcano,
Atop it you await me; I become devoted,
To you; You to me,
Together we mend; Glued,
And flesh into one,
We become a stitch in time; Sewed together by GOD's hands,
Of a fabric that'll last forever,
A movie that can't rewind,
Play only; My love for you becomes that of no other kind,
For you my love; Are my Ray of Sunshine
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9420
Posted: February 25, 2003 2:37 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2003 2:37 PM PST
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