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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: THE FATHER (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! I called my man tonight
I was listening to neil young
bought a new camaro
and thinking
of talking to him
his dad answered
and had one on me
for a long time
first i thought he was
uncle tom
and then brother mike
we laughed about a
lot of things
silly things
can you imagine
it was the father
of the man
i love.
he called me a fond name and
we laughed again.
Up the ladder:
Guilt
Down the ladder:
Could it be You (When the Sunshines Through...)
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Posted: February 22, 2003 11:02 PM PST; Last modified: February 22, 2003 11:02 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9205313 Overall Rank: 9419 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.212.98
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23-Feb-03/1:40 AM
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fix the end, otherwise perfect. Less is more, more is more. I'm a whore.
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TanHand @ 68.14.26.239
> god'swife
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23-Feb-03/4:58 PM
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The irony of "Less Is More" is that LMVDR was a fatass.
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god'swife @ 209.179.214.79
> TanHand
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23-Feb-03/5:18 PM
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Please extrapolate some more, I don't understand. Clue me in.
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TanHand @ 68.14.26.239
> god'swife
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12-Mar-03/10:17 PM
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LUDVIG MIES VAN DE ROHE, FINAL PRESIDENT OF THE BAUHAUS SCHOOL IN WIEMAR/DESSAU BEFORE THEIR LACK OF PITCHED ROOVES CAUGHT DER FUHRER'S EYE. DESIGNED BUILDINGS LIKE THE SEAGRAM'S HEADQUARTERS ON PARK AVE. DESIGNED FURNITURE, LIKE THE CHAIR FOR THE BARCELONA EXHIBITION. IN MY OPINION HIS FINEST WORK WAS THE NEW NATIONAL GALLERY IN BERLIN. LIKE AN INDUSTRIAL ARTS AND CRAFTS TYPE CONSTRUCTION, POETICALLY CONSIDERED EXPOSED GIRDERS, BEAUTIFULLY STATED CIELINGS, AN ENORMOUS ROOF THAT SEEMS TO FLOAT ON DELICATE PILLARS.
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