poemranker ::THE FATHER by ~* ATHENA *~

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Free verse № 41248

THE FATHER

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Feb 2003 · 4 comments

I called my man tonight I was listening to neil young bought a new camaro and thinking of talking to him his dad answered and had one on me for a long time first i thought he was uncle tom and then brother mike we laughed about a lot of things silly things can you imagine it was the father of the man i love. he called me a fond name and we laughed again.

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[n/a] god'swife 23-Feb-03/1:40 AM Reply
fix the end, otherwise perfect. Less is more, more is more. I'm a whore.

[n/a] TanHand › god'swife 23-Feb-03/4:58 PM Reply
The irony of "Less Is More" is that LMVDR was a fatass.
[n/a] god'swife › TanHand 23-Feb-03/5:18 PM Reply
Please extrapolate some more, I don't understand. Clue me in.
[n/a] TanHand › god'swife 12-Mar-03/10:17 PM Reply
LUDVIG MIES VAN DE ROHE, FINAL PRESIDENT OF THE BAUHAUS SCHOOL IN WIEMAR/DESSAU BEFORE THEIR LACK OF PITCHED ROOVES CAUGHT DER FUHRER'S EYE. DESIGNED BUILDINGS LIKE THE SEAGRAM'S HEADQUARTERS ON PARK AVE. DESIGNED FURNITURE, LIKE THE CHAIR FOR THE BARCELONA EXHIBITION. IN MY OPINION HIS FINEST WORK WAS THE NEW NATIONAL GALLERY IN BERLIN. LIKE AN INDUSTRIAL ARTS AND CRAFTS TYPE CONSTRUCTION, POETICALLY CONSIDERED EXPOSED GIRDERS, BEAUTIFULLY STATED CIELINGS, AN ENORMOUS ROOF THAT SEEMS TO FLOAT ON DELICATE PILLARS.