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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
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THE FATHER (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
I called my man tonight I was listening to neil young bought a new camaro and thinking of talking to him his dad answered and had one on me for a long time first i thought he was uncle tom and then brother mike we laughed about a lot of things silly things can you imagine it was the father of the man i love. he called me a fond name and we laughed again.

god'swife 23-Feb-03/1:40 AM
fix the end, otherwise perfect. Less is more, more is more. I'm a whore.





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