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The Poet (Free verse) by muffin With a pen
And a paper
Through words and sentences
Expressions through metaphors
Feelings explained in analogy
Imagery in its most creative form
Displaying the beats of your heart
To a paper that does not reply
Teardrops staining the pages
Smiles engaging memories
Earth and all its resources
Thoughts of the world
As I see it
Imagination through the eye of
The Poet
Up the ladder:
Jeremi and my cat oh and Elton
Down the ladder:
To Laugh Or Cry
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Posted: February 16, 2003 8:17 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2003 8:17 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8320 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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16-Feb-03/10:51 PM
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"To a paper that does not reply" I guess a poem has not jumped up and attacked you yet? they will, but until then this is a 'shot in the dark statement' me lass.
Try writing on the Turin Shroud instead of paper! It can be a great way to cure writer's block! Also crapper's block!
part of me wants to tell you to write about your observations instead of you imaginings, but then there's another part of me that thinks you maybe should get it all out in a journal first, and then maybe go read some literature, and then some literary criticism (www.poets.org is a good source) and then, after aeons of study, and a cathartic dawn of comprehension, then, and only then, should you re-endeavor to write an poeme. and another part of me thinks i should go bowling. who will win? i dunno.
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