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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising.
Read with caution!
Jeremi and my cat oh and Elton (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w
SO I better yell help. my man wears a rabbit coat while he looks at me from a bed of what used to be a long legged diatribe of acid dreams and italian ice. how nice we sit in our sand boxes and wonder can we fly if someone put us in a plane could we fly? lord knows we could run with it. innocence is controlled yet, we love the challenge of knowledge. can we have a cake and eat it time will tell. homer was blind, not blonde.

Up the ladder: Winter
Down the ladder: The Poet

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8319
Posted: January 25, 2003 10:19 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2003 10:19 PM PST
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Comments:
[6] deleted user @ 152.163.188.228 | 26-Jan-03/7:14 AM | Reply
I can't grip the concept, or really understand anything any of it, but i think its funny so i give it a six
[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 26-Jan-03/7:30 AM | Reply
I'm with JC on this one. ish.
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