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staring (Other) by moonlight_sky stop the staring
what do you feel
when your looking?
why can't you just say?
been told all the time
but its just not the same
till im told the words
myself from you
it just might sound
strange but you might
think so too
and if that is so
who will tell who?
Up the ladder:
Button
Down the ladder:
outside my reach
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Posted: February 12, 2003 3:46 PM PST; Last modified: February 12, 2003 3:46 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10519 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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12-Feb-03/5:49 PM
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My hoof will tell your face... right after i beat you senseless with a head of kale (the equivalent to being beaten with a head of lettuce, but with more calcium). beware.
A good subject which you could have written about better, it would be interesting to read it from the POV of the starer, black gloves, menacem so much more to touch on. This is a bit too obvious try delving deeper(5)
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