poemranker ::staring by moonlight_sky

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staring

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Feb 2003 · 2 comments

stop the staring what do you feel when your looking? why can't you just say? been told all the time but its just not the same till im told the words myself from you it just might sound strange but you might think so too and if that is so who will tell who?

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[5] Bachus 12-Feb-03/5:49 PM Reply
My hoof will tell your face... right after i beat you senseless with a head of kale (the equivalent to being beaten with a head of lettuce, but with more calcium). beware.
[n/a] Caducus 13-Feb-03/6:11 AM Reply
A good subject which you could have written about better, it would be interesting to read it from the POV of the starer, black gloves, menacem so much more to touch on. This is a bit too obvious try delving deeper(5)