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staring (Other) by moonlight_sky

stop the staring what do you feel when your looking? why can't you just say? been told all the time but its just not the same till im told the words myself from you it just might sound strange but you might think so too and if that is so who will tell who?

Caducus 13-Feb-03/6:11 AM
A good subject which you could have written about better, it would be interesting to read it from the POV of the starer, black gloves, menacem so much more to touch on. This is a bit too obvious try delving deeper(5)




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