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Black rose in the moonlight (Free verse) by greatguy
All thoughts eventually return, like a circle.
To the dark waterfall of your hair, the tender
chocolate hue of your skin - your bottomless eyes.
My heart steadily pounds a rythm, for you
like a drummer lost in music,
a couple, dancing la rumba.
Winds blow, shifting over water, blowing your hair
Rain falls and splatters, the teardrops shed in sadness
A tender feeling, merciful, comforting, for my pain.
The caring echoed in your eyes, felt in your smooth palms.
A dimple creases your cheeck, teeth peeking impishly,
amidst dark beauty.
A black rose in the moonlight,
for your perfection is that of a flower
blooming with dark color, smelling sweetly
And a red rose in the sun.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6381
Posted: February 9, 2003 7:10 PM PST; Last modified: February 9, 2003 7:10 PM PST
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