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Black rose in the moonlight (Free verse) by greatguy
All thoughts eventually return, like a circle. To the dark waterfall of your hair, the tender chocolate hue of your skin - your bottomless eyes. My heart steadily pounds a rythm, for you like a drummer lost in music, a couple, dancing la rumba. Winds blow, shifting over water, blowing your hair Rain falls and splatters, the teardrops shed in sadness A tender feeling, merciful, comforting, for my pain. The caring echoed in your eyes, felt in your smooth palms. A dimple creases your cheeck, teeth peeking impishly, amidst dark beauty. A black rose in the moonlight, for your perfection is that of a flower blooming with dark color, smelling sweetly And a red rose in the sun.

Up the ladder: The Galenoi Saga
Down the ladder: Homecomings

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6379
Posted: February 9, 2003 7:10 PM PST; Last modified: February 9, 2003 7:10 PM PST
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[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 10-Feb-03/4:58 AM | Reply
Quite Beautiful, you old romantic.
worthy of a 9
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