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finally found you (Free verse) by webguy
(finally found you finely founded: your foundations never truly rooted on truth and trust finally found your ego tripping on mine how easy you twist your tongue) last night was a thousand years of discoveries and civilization, suddenly in a half-step you showcased your accomplishments through the ages. how well you dance! in was industrial revolution over live music. i can see bulky railroad engineers sweating it out on top of a grand piano. how easily can a victorian lady sway to a sudden beat? or maybe i am just my melodramtic surreal self but you last night was a thousand years of thinking and rethinking, how easy you twist your feet like your tongue's play with cherry handles finally found you finely bred magnificent victorian foundations shattered by a slip. your dance was great but not when you called me a different name.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2222223
Weighted score: 5.111111
Overall Rank: 6012
Posted: July 10, 2002 5:09 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 5:09 PM PDT
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[n/a] god'swife @ 209.179.138.220 | 5-Sep-02/11:01 PM | Reply
Cherry handles?
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