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Free verse № 3233

A Promise

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

I've always searched those same eyes Those same vague dreams Those tears of the past. . .fear nothing Not even the damp morning mist Nor the chill of the evening breeze Those hands brimming with light Shall touch the world with warmth And those wings against a storm Eternally they shall soar We shall glide along distant waves Until the end of this journey As I ease your pain and gloom I shall breathe forever with thee

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[6] Wulf 9-Aug-02/2:55 PM Reply
A nice lament... a requiem