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A Promise (Free verse) by javelinne
I've always searched those same eyes Those same vague dreams Those tears of the past. . .fear nothing Not even the damp morning mist Nor the chill of the evening breeze Those hands brimming with light Shall touch the world with warmth And those wings against a storm Eternally they shall soar We shall glide along distant waves Until the end of this journey As I ease your pain and gloom I shall breathe forever with thee

Down the ladder: finally found you

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2222223
Weighted score: 5.111111
Overall Rank: 6011
Posted: July 6, 2002 9:30 PM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2002 9:30 PM PDT
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[6] Wulf @ 65.59.20.181 | 9-Aug-02/2:55 PM | Reply
A nice lament... a requiem
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