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A Promise (Free verse) by javelinne
I've always searched those same eyes
Those same vague dreams
Those tears of the past. . .fear nothing
Not even the damp morning mist
Nor the chill of the evening breeze
Those hands brimming with light
Shall touch the world with warmth
And those wings against a storm
Eternally they shall soar
We shall glide along distant waves
Until the end of this journey
As I ease your pain and gloom
I shall breathe forever with thee
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2222223
Weighted score: 5.111111
Overall Rank: 6011
Posted: July 6, 2002 9:30 PM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2002 9:30 PM PDT
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