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Sandpaper (Free verse) by DevilTmptrss
Licking at my inner ear,
no longer can I stand it;
Sandpaper.
Harsh words I'm forced to hear.
Yelling,
volume increases,
I scream,
they shout,
we fight.
Help.
Why?
No more.
It flows in jagged fashion,
and strikes relentlessly.
Quintessence of evil
inside my hollow home
eating away at sanity
as I cry for one more breath.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2222223
Weighted score: 5.111111
Overall Rank: 6014
Posted: July 12, 2002 12:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 12:30 AM PDT
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