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Sandpaper (Free verse) by DevilTmptrss Licking at my inner ear,
no longer can I stand it;
Sandpaper.
Harsh words I'm forced to hear.
Yelling,
volume increases,
I scream,
they shout,
we fight.
Help.
Why?
No more.
It flows in jagged fashion,
and strikes relentlessly.
Quintessence of evil
inside my hollow home
eating away at sanity
as I cry for one more breath.
Up the ladder:
finally found you
Down the ladder:
Crossspecies Blues
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Posted: July 12, 2002 12:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 12:30 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.111111 Overall Rank: 6013 Comments:
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deleted user @ 64.12.96.79
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12-Jul-02/11:49 AM
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May I recommend taking up a sport?
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