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Bad Mood (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
The lights are dim, My visions grim Filled with hate, lust, greed, and Antiemenity There is something wrong, Just can't seem to get along Wanna stick a knife in someones back Cut off their head in one swift hack Put a bullet thru your brain Make you suffer for my pain Fucking guage your eyes out of your numbskull Show you who the fuck has control Take iron thongs to your throat and pull out your voice box Make you suck my dick you stupid piece of shit Make sure my lighters lit, Stick it in your clit Burn your ass from the inside out, for all my self doubt Take nitrosoxide to your mouth and bash out your teeth Just for fun bite your nipples till they bleed, then once I succeed I'm gonna cum in your fucking hair and leave it there Then stick dynomite in your ear When your dead I'll put the remains of your head on my bed Cut off your hand and use it to masterbate OH! BABY!! THAT FELT GREAT! Then I'll debate, what else I want to mutalate Hang your tits on my wall On a shelf so that they won't fall When i get the urge, and I'm sure it'll reamerge Then I'll stick'em on my cock and fuck'em till my balls rot and turn blue Then I'll burn'em with the rest of you Oh yeah by the way "FUCK YOU!!"

Up the ladder: Friends
Down the ladder: A prayer for my mum

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 6.428861
Overall Rank: 752
Posted: February 3, 2003 5:48 PM PST; Last modified: February 4, 2003 5:01 PM PST
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Feb-03/3:00 PM | Reply
a lonely man with what appears to be nacho cheese hanging from his beard and yamuca? is kind of clapping from the second tier upper left... can you see him. he liked it... he thinks you have talent... his name is chip, he went to art school too. i think he fancies you? he's consistantly the only one that comes to your shows... save me of course, but that's just how i show you my inner feelings and sole. hug me. 10!

GOLDEN Q -TIP AWARDE INRETROSPECTIVE IRRELEVENCE AND FUNGUS CONTROL... ON THIS FINE DAY IN CHIRTLE DIRP WURP WURP..<brought to you by 'stridox' howe to make ox shit work for your face and 'Lemming' what the fuck? why not jump?>
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