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Double Love (Other) by Rachy_Baby
My love is torn Between two guys My heart is breaking And cant decide You?re both so sweet And kind to me When our eyes meet My heart starts to beat I want to be with you But I want to be with him Feeling like this makes me blue And there?s only one thing you can do Prove to me you love me Show me that you care Help me to see? That you are there Help me to know I want you Maybe then? The pain will slow.

Up the ladder: Old Man
Down the ladder: Death from a broken heart

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11059
Posted: January 17, 2003 9:35 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2003 9:35 PM PST
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