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Death from a broken heart (Free verse) by Rachy_Baby
You sliced my heart clean in two You said you loved me, you said it was true But I found out it was all a lie And now I am going to die I put down the razor sharp blade And looked at the damage it had made My blood hit the floor I was no more Death was at my doorstep You didn?t even know I never meant anything to you And you never let your feelings show It?s not my fault You didn?t get to say goodbye Don?t blame me For the feelings you caused There?s one more thing before I go I want you all to know I love you mummy And I will always remain daddy?s little girl

Up the ladder: Double Love
Down the ladder: Kidnapped In Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11060
Posted: January 17, 2003 9:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2003 9:36 PM PST
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