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Death from a broken heart

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

You sliced my heart clean in two You said you loved me, you said it was true But I found out it was all a lie And now I am going to die I put down the razor sharp blade And looked at the damage it had made My blood hit the floor I was no more Death was at my doorstep You didn?t even know I never meant anything to you And you never let your feelings show It?s not my fault You didn?t get to say goodbye Don?t blame me For the feelings you caused There?s one more thing before I go I want you all to know I love you mummy And I will always remain daddy?s little girl

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