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Death from a broken heart (Free verse) by Rachy_Baby
You sliced my heart clean in two
You said you loved me, you said it was true
But I found out it was all a lie
And now I am going to die
I put down the razor sharp blade
And looked at the damage it had made
My blood hit the floor
I was no more
Death was at my doorstep
You didn?t even know
I never meant anything to you
And you never let your feelings show
It?s not my fault
You didn?t get to say goodbye
Don?t blame me
For the feelings you caused
There?s one more thing before I go
I want you all to know
I love you mummy
And I will always remain daddy?s little girl
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11060
Posted: January 17, 2003 9:36 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2003 9:36 PM PST
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