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Broken Man (Free verse) by Dostoyevsky A broken man,
A noble thought,
To be broken by war,
The suffering and hatered,
Running deep,
Like underground streams,
To be broken by love,
Shattered like bone,
By the truth,
Remove the blindfold,
Burning bright,
The sun is hidden,
Like the truth,
It hurts,
Up the ladder:
Spot the difference
Down the ladder:
Playing Jerry and crap
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Posted: January 13, 2003 12:51 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2003 12:51 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7019925 Overall Rank: 11977 Comments:
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lunar @ 195.92.67.75
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13-Jan-03/1:47 PM
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I like the last bit best i dont really realte to this poem though im afraid.
It's quite difficult for me to read these while listening to Wishbone Ash.
Do I notice just a hint of Plato in here? Also I can see that only myself and Lunar have read this one. All I can suggest is that you spend time reading the works of others. Have a nice day-see you tomorrow. 156 view(s)
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