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Broken Man (Free verse) by Dostoyevsky

A broken man, A noble thought, To be broken by war, The suffering and hatered, Running deep, Like underground streams, To be broken by love, Shattered like bone, By the truth, Remove the blindfold, Burning bright, The sun is hidden, Like the truth, It hurts,

Yardbird 13-Apr-03/12:52 PM
Pretentious twaddle. Giving you a nought seems like generosity...




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